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It Has to be Done

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It Has to be Done - Anderson
Why is it when we conversate
you always bring me to my knees.
And you insist on always coming 'round,
knowing that's one thing that I hate.

It's something you may not comprehend,
an idea you'll surely come to hate.
But we both know it needs to be done,
so I can be better in the end.

But there's a devil in your smile,
and I want to taste your sin.
My voice echoes in the empty of your love,
filled only by our song on the radio dial.

That's when I realize that love is so cruel,
so I bury you deep inside of me,
so deep that you can't breathe,
and tell myself I'll no longer play the fool.

It's not easy, but it needs to be done.
Goodbye was never good to me,
but your hello cuts much more deep.
Something tells me, it will all be over soon.
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

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Post by doubleshot »

Have you put these songs to music?
man I love those certain things
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Post by HillgrassBluebillyFTW »

doubleshot wrote:Have you put these songs to music?
As soon as I learn to play guitar.
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

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Post by jewlee138 »

Anderson wrote:
As soon as I learn to play guitar.
How long have I been hearing you say that ????
Hot "finger-on-keyboard" action

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Post by HillgrassBluebillyFTW »

jewlee138 wrote:
Anderson wrote:
As soon as I learn to play guitar.
How long have I been hearing you say that ????
too forking long.
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

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TopDailyMemes.com
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Kwalis.com
SoHumorous.com
FailUniversity.com
FaceFullOf.com
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ThePeopleBlog.com
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Anderson wrote:
too f*#king long.
well, hopefully not as long as that mullet you're getting....

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Post by WaitUntilTomorrow »

I thought EVERY boy in Fort Wayne knew how to play guitar? That's at least what they tell me. Your stuff is begging to be songs, though. Get to it!
I'm a critic of this shameful contract, and of wasteful consumption, on general principles. Since it's nonsensical, plus embarrassing, to be an outspoken critic of things you do yourself, I set myself long ago to denting the salacious appetites of my homeland and making us a more perfect union by living inside this imperfect beast, poking at its belly from the inside with my one little life and the small, pointed sword of my pen. Some may say this is rationalization, but....I really like medium Snickers Blizzards from Dairy Queen. And you can't get those in India. At least not good ones.
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Re: It Has to be Done

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Anderson wrote:It Has to be Done - Anderson
Why is it when we conversate
I believe the word is 'converse'.
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Post by Garr »

I believe Websters disagrees.

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/conversate

Main Entry: conversate
Part of Speech: verb
Definition: to socialize and chat; to converse with another
Etymology: back-formation from conversation
Usage: slang
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Post by subgenius88 »

Back-formation is an euphemism for incorrect usage. A back formation is " the formation of what looks like a root word from an already existing word which might be - but is not - a derivative of the former."
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Post by Garr »

i.e. slang.

and besides. . .it's not an essay, it's an artistic expression. if lyrics and poems were limited to grammatically correct structure and proper spelling, it would take a major blow.

dictionary.com is one of my favorite sites, and I'm a "lexiphile", so I understand the etymological terms and don't need them explained to me.
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Post by subgenius88 »

Garr wrote: I'm a "lexiphile"
Damn, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to make fun of your condition. I hope you feel better soon.
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Post by Garr »

:lol:
There are 10 types of people in the world.

Those who understand binary. . .

. . .and those who don't.

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[url=http://www.TopDailyMemes.com]TopDailyMemes.com[/url]
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Post by HillgrassBluebillyFTW »

and it fits the rhyme... duh.
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

If you want to know what I am working on check out these sites:

OhSoHumorous.com
TopDailyMemes.com
RandomDailyMemes.com
BestDailyMemes.com
FortWayneMusic.om
Kwalis.com
SoHumorous.com
FailUniversity.com
FaceFullOf.com
NuZuDu.com
FireFlyGoods.com
ThePeopleBlog.com
StealMyMemes.com
DontStealMyMemes.com

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Post by HillgrassBluebillyFTW »

where have all the good times gone?
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

If you want to know what I am working on check out these sites:

OhSoHumorous.com
TopDailyMemes.com
RandomDailyMemes.com
BestDailyMemes.com
FortWayneMusic.om
Kwalis.com
SoHumorous.com
FailUniversity.com
FaceFullOf.com
NuZuDu.com
FireFlyGoods.com
ThePeopleBlog.com
StealMyMemes.com
DontStealMyMemes.com

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