help me write a bio

[Sankofa]

thanks

[Oliver's Army]

There is a lot that *could* be added, but how short is 'short'?

[Sankofa]

the brevity wasn't defined, so I figured the more compact, the more betterer

add away

[HillgrassBluebillyFTW]

i've never known stephen to ever be short of words.

[Oliver's Army]

PM sent

[Sankofa]

Get out the pick axes and have at it. I've no pride in this field, merely a desire to make for something of an interesting nature for perusing eyes.

[Dan Bourbonnais]

I don't know Sankofa so for a blind taste test, here is what I got from your bio:
1.Doing rap for 10 years
2.Worked with other groups
3.Travelled a lot
4.Still doin' it
If this bio is for the internet you should include keywords that you think people will be looking for - to be found by search engines
And BOLD on the Tortoise Hustle- if possible

[The_Dude]

I don't know Sankofa so for a blind taste test, here is what I got from your bio:
1.Doing rap for 10 years
2.Worked with other groups
3.Travelled a lot
4.Still doin' it
If this bio is for the internet you should include keywords that you think people will be looking for - to be found by search engines
And BOLD on the Tortoise Hustle- if possible

Sankofa's been doing rap and free porn for 10 years while driving a Chevrolet. He's worked with other group such as Britney Spears Enters Rehab and Paris Hilton Porn Video which, of course, means he's travelled a lot. He's still doing it these days, but like Brad Pitt, it seems to come naturally with experience. He's known best for his collaborations with the war in Iraq and Simon Cowell but this American Idol superstar won't stop here! Sankofa owns an iPhone, too! It's all good, though...Bill Gates is still a fan.

[Al Quandt]

Santa Kofa brings gift wrapped rhymes to children all across the world once a year. When not paging for high profile politicians you can view his one-man-cd-in-a-noisebox routine where he keeps a summer home in the small town of Fort Wayne, IN. Do not look at him straight in the face or sideways with sunglasses, this man will suck your soul from your feet leaving you inches from death. It is recommended that you approach this man with one hand on your baby maker, the other in the air and repeating verses and choruses when prompted by this unholiest conductor.

[Dan Bourbonnais]

Great! I feel i know him/her so much better now.

[bassjones]

I don't know Sankofa so for a blind taste test, here is what I got from your bio:
1.Doing rap for 10 years
2.Worked with other groups
3.Travelled a lot
4.Still doin' it
If this bio is for the internet you should include keywords that you think people will be looking for - to be found by search engines
And BOLD on the Tortoise Hustle- if possible

Sankofa's been doing rap and free porn for 10 years while driving a Chevrolet. He's worked with other group such as Britney Spears Enters Rehab and Paris Hilton Porn Video which, of course, means he's travelled a lot. He's still doing it these days, but like Brad Pitt, it seems to come naturally with experience. He's known best for his collaborations with the war in Iraq and Simon Cowell but this American Idol superstar won't stop here! Sankofa owns an iPhone, too! It's all good, though...Bill Gates is still a fan.

Now that is awesome!

[Al Quandt]

Great! I feel i know him/her so much better now.

I have known the man for few years now and spoke with him several times and I know him now less then I did before I knew him.

if that makes sense. a truely mysterious fellow.