Redemption by Anderson

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Redemption by Anderson

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Redemption (pending title)
by Anderson


After hearing the stories I'm about to tell,
you may not think of me so well.
Cause there's blood on my hands, and lives on my gun
and regret in my heart for the things that I have done.

I move quietly from town to town,
never staying long enough to put root down.
Standing outside in the pouring down rain,
waiting for my chance to hop the next train.

I shot a man in New Orleans
now the authorites are after me.
So I'm travelling the highway once again,
the road and this bottle my only friend.

Sat down at the bar next to a blind prophet,
said he'd seen my future, but wouldn't come off it.
He denied my twice, so I shot him in the face,
don't remember the town, but the bar was Strawberries place.

I left my girl back in Tennessee,
I loved her dearly but she was mean.
Shot her down, she wouldn't take my name.
My heavy heart the only thing to blame.

Jailer, tonight I'm a restless soul.
For tomorrow I swing from the gallows pole.
I was found guilty for all my sin,
It'll be over soon, and I'll be on that road again.
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

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Post by randomhero »

since no one else is gonna comment I'm gonna say I like this.
If we are all God's children, what makes Jesus so special?

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big surprise there!
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Post by antihero999 »

i like it but is mr. johnny cash an influence?
i shot a man once but that was in reno
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Post by HillgrassBluebillyFTW »

antihero999 wrote:i like it but is mr. johnny cash an influence?
i shot a man once but that was in reno
I was listening to alot of J.C. when I wrote this.
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

If you want to know what I am working on check out these sites:

OhSoHumorous.com
TopDailyMemes.com
RandomDailyMemes.com
BestDailyMemes.com
FortWayneMusic.om
Kwalis.com
SoHumorous.com
FailUniversity.com
FaceFullOf.com
NuZuDu.com
FireFlyGoods.com
ThePeopleBlog.com
StealMyMemes.com
DontStealMyMemes.com

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