Got any titles for this one?

andrew spangler · Post by **andrew spangler** » Thu Apr 26, 2007 11:17 pm

im not really sure how to structure a song. But I wrote most of this tonight. I have this melody in my head for this,but it is far beyond my vocal abilities,which are nothing to talk about. the capped words are screaming.

intro:
Let us see.
if you can write me a half-hearted melody.
you're what I need.
hurry and show me.
when i should take the lead.

chorus:
LETS GO!

Show me the road

RIGHT NOW!

Before I fold.

LIGHTS OUT!

verse1 :
I wish I werent face down.
so would you tell me now.
can I watch all hope drown.
you got too close this time around.

chorus:
LETS GO!

Show me the road

RIGHT NOW!

Before I fold.

LIGHTS OUT!

we were so

FACE DOWN!

perfectly

SCREAMING!

not meant to be.
not meant to care.
not meant to follow.
not meant for me.
finally gives me a scare.
so hard to swallow.

Garr · Post by **Garr** » Fri Apr 27, 2007 5:24 am

Folding In
Face Down
Half of a Heart
Hope Drowns
Drowned Hope
Perfectly Screaming

Those are a couple that I think are catchy and match something somewhere in the song.

andrew spangler · Post by **andrew spangler** » Fri Apr 27, 2007 4:31 pm

I could switch those words as a 2nd chorus,or something...those are good man,but then it would be my song,and yours. so if it went big,id have to pay you off.which i wouldnt mind as long as i got famous!

andrew spangler · Post by **andrew spangler** » Fri Apr 27, 2007 4:42 pm

no no....the bridge. I have no idea what a bridge is.

Garr · Post by **Garr** » Fri Apr 27, 2007 8:33 pm

I was just suggesting titles, man.

You can have them and call them yours. When you make it big, you can just send me a red headed hooker 5'4", 135#, 36DD, green eyes, lots of freckles.

andrew spangler · Post by **andrew spangler** » Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:56 pm

hmm,does 5,5'' work for you?

Garr · Post by **Garr** » Tue May 01, 2007 2:54 pm

Yeah, but then she has to be a Strawberry Blond.