Busted Stuff: Stories of You

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HillgrassBluebillyFTW
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Busted Stuff: Stories of You

Post by HillgrassBluebillyFTW »

You were a nursing student,
I worked hard to earn us pay.
Things got rough, I got scared,
turned you and your love away.

I was and confused and didn't know,
but I thought I'd had enough.
It took me years to figure out,
up to my neck in busted stuff.

You were the girl at the sandwich shop,
it took only one kiss to make my heart stop.
You helped me shed my old skin,
built me up, and knocked me down again.

You were wrong and didn't know,
I couldn't have given you enough.
But you didn't want my love,
and tossed it away like busted stuff.

You were my friends girl,
he split, we gave it a whirl.
I fell hard for you like a brick,
when he came to town, you dropped me quick.

I can never tell you no,
but I'm pretty sure I've had enough.
I lose my mind when I see you out,
and retreat with my busted stuff.

You were my favorite waitress,
at my least favorite place.
But spent many a night drinking to you,
another round to see your sweet face.

You really may never know,
of you I can't get enough.
I want to waste my time with you,
and fix this busted stuff.
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

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traumaqueen
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Post by traumaqueen »

so rhymey.....it would probably have to be done country-western style.
lots of good points to it, a few cliche's that would need changed out.
i like it.
because i like story songs.
and it feels real.
and i like you.
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