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Okay, so me and my band just got done recording a brand new song... Its still in its rough stages..

I want you all to take a listen to it and give me your honest opinions.. Any constructive criticism would be greatly apprechiated.
I've let my friends listen to it and they say they all like it, but then again, they are my friends, and dont want to hurt my feelings..

I am the lead singer, so any criticism you can give me would be great as well.

The link is right here. www.myspace.com/vergeofsubmission the song is called in the night...

I thank all you musicians for taking the time to listen to our music and attempt to make us better.

*changed subject from "are" new song to "our" new song because it was driving me nuts!*

I want to start this post by stating that I do not listen to this style of music, so take this for what it is worth.

1. You do not suck.

2. My biggest complaint would be the length of the intro. It is like a minute and a half before anything really starts. If I bought the cd that would be fine, if I was listening to the radio I would change the channel.

3. The vocals are a bit overbearing. When they are mixed, perhaps they will mesh better.

4. Everything else sounds good. Keep it up.

I think you guys sound good.

Only thing is that it takes too long to get to song.
Like have like one song take a while and the next one just jump into it.

I agree with was already said except, when i heard the vocals... it reminded me of a DVDA song. That's probably not a good thing. I'm just really not crazy about that kind of vocal style. That's just my humble opinion.