"I'm sorry"

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"I'm sorry"

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"I'm Sorry" - J.D. Anderson
You came to me in what seemed to be a dream,
and told he things weren't always as they seem.
Don't belive them, as sincere as they might be,
when a person says to you the words, "I'm Sorry."

Are they? Or just have nothing better to say?
Two words spoken and everything is s'pose to be okay.
Like covering a gunshot wound with bandage,
such little effort can't repair the damage.

Two words overly used so much,
like "Hello, how are you?" and such.
So commonly said before you know,
dropped in passing or on the go.

Why did you come to me and tell me these things?
Knowing the problems this realization brings.
the meaning of the words, I can't comprehend this
lost in the darkness, ignorance truly is bliss.
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

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Post by The_Dude »

While reading, I was reminded of "Lullaby" by Shawn Mullins.

Mostly spoken word (i think) with the only singing coming in the chorus.
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Post by HillgrassBluebillyFTW »

i think this one needs to be re-read.
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

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Post by The_Dude »

anderson wrote:i think this one needs to be re-read.
read it again...

...or...

...move on.

You decide.
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Post by HillgrassBluebillyFTW »

The_Dude wrote:
anderson wrote:i think this one needs to be re-read.
read it again...

...or...

...move on.

You decide.
I'm over it.
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

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Post by The_Dude »

rrrrright.
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