(Gimme a) Taste

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HillgrassBluebillyFTW
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(Gimme a) Taste

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(Gimme a) Taste

Lil cutie with the sundress on
Lookin so damn good you’re wrong
dancin naked all night long
work your body to the break of dawn

Cherry balm on your ruby red lips
just the touch of your fingertips
has got me doin flips
work til the sweat drips

Put my hands on your waiste
pull you closer just for a taste
pleasure written all over your face
whattaya say with leave this place

Legs that go for days
thinkin of all the nasty ways
to leave your body in a daze
while our bodies twist and plays
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

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Post by HillgrassBluebillyFTW »

comment bitches
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

If you want to know what I am working on check out these sites:

OhSoHumorous.com
TopDailyMemes.com
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BestDailyMemes.com
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FailUniversity.com
FaceFullOf.com
NuZuDu.com
FireFlyGoods.com
ThePeopleBlog.com
StealMyMemes.com
DontStealMyMemes.com

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Re: (Gimme a) Taste

Post by Grindspine »

Anderson wrote:while our bodies twist and plays
Take the S off of plays... That'd be better.

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Post by Scrudge Bucket »

Yeah, and grammatically correct.
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