Not Today (and it's not very good)

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HillgrassBluebillyFTW
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Not Today (and it's not very good)

Post by HillgrassBluebillyFTW »

We all have troubles,
but not today..
We all get down,
but not today.

Today, I’m gonna let the rain
wash away all my worries.
I’m gonna sit and watch
the world go by today.

We all have worries,
but not today.
We all have our pride
but not today.

Today, I’m gonna let the world
wash away with my pain
I’m gonna stay inside
and pretend it don’t exist.
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

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Post by shark1966 »

"let the rain was away" that's another one of those overused phrases man. avoid it if at all possible.

This one doesn't really go anywhere for me or evoke anything really engaging. Too vague in a way.
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